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Back when I was hostessing at a casual dining restaurant, we were always told to romance the features after seating our guests. This meant saying a thing or two about the monthly featured items or the daily feature. For example, our cedar planked salmon was so soft you dont even need teeth to eat it.

Picture of Product Descriptions: Are You Romancing Your Features? [source:getelastic.com]

Ive shared my shoe store war stories here before, but that was another trick up my sleeve when selling shoes. I made sure I always had something unique or positive to say about the shoe in the customers hand. If I didnt have anything good to say about it, I would steer her to something that did have a selling feature to romance. Did you know that you can throw your canvas Keds in the washing machine?

Most product descriptions do not sell at all. Theyre impersonal. They say nothing about why someone should buy something, only what they would be buying. They dont tell customers why they are going to love this product and wonder how they ever lived without it, how they can use it for so much more than a typical [widget], how this models unique features make it the best choice.

But occasionally I come across some very well written descriptions that give me a glimmer of hope for online retail. Id like to share a few with you.

The Indie Dress features a cross-over neckline and empire bodice. Made from 18.5 micron New Zealand merino wool. Side slash pockets. Relaxed Hood. Machine washable. By Ibex.

Product description with personality (by Title Nine):

Free yourself from fussy when you pull on the Indie. Cross-over neckline and empire bodice move easily from well-dressed to WOW, but never compromises on easy care and comfort. Made of the finest blend of merino wool from only the best and happiest New Zealand sheep. 18.5 micron means wool so fine that theres zero itch. Side slash pockets, relaxed hood. Machine washable. By Ibex.

The Iceman crewneck sweater 100% Cashmoore and great for casual or dressed-up occasions. Includes shark tooth detail at neck, color blocking on raglan sleeves and spandex binding at cuffs.

For the guy who cares but doesnt want to work too hard to look good, the low-key Iceman crew has just enough spice in the sleeve stripes to inspire confidence without distraction. Guaranteed chill defying, the Iceman is comfortable, made from our gift-to-mankind, soft Cashmoore. Easy-does-it details: sharks tooth detail at crew neck, color blocking on raglan sleeves and spandex binding at cuffs. For chillin.

100% polyester, 360g fleece makes this jacket much warmer than your typical fleece. Wear it on the hills or on the town. Poly/spandex overlays with knit and woven polyester lining. Machine washable. Standard fit.

The Latika was recently named The Worlds Best Fleece Jacket Ever by my sister. Thats actually true. Here are some reasons the Latika is so awesome and you should for sure read this before deciding which jacket to get because, forgetting all the dumb stuff I wrote below, the features on the Latika happen to be incredibly compelling. Here we go:

* Super warm thanks to plush 360g fleece and a snug hem cinch cord.

* My guess is that no human person will know how 360g compares to other jackets. So, please just know that its way warmer than your typical fleece.

* Luxuriously fully lined with a soft knit body and silky woven arms to make it easy to get on.

* Everyone likes the word Luxuriously. I like the words elegant, nuance and onslaught too but those words have nothing to do with the Latika.

* Two cozy hand pockets which is perfect for everyone looking for two cozy hand pockets, and who isnt these days?

* Hidden forearm pocket perfect for stashing your stashworthy stuff.

* I dont like what I wrote in number 5 above. Please dont reread it.

* Ultra Standard Fit. That means you dont have to be the most fit climber in the world to wear it. You can still tell people youre a climber though.

* I thought I made up the phrase Ultra Standard but I just looked it up and I didnt make it up.

* Machine washable so you can wear it for full-on mud wrestling on Monday and then Ladies Night on Tuesday.

* Made of the highest quality materials 100% polyester fleece, poly/spandex overlays, knitted and woven polyester lining and YKK zipper.

* If you get a Latika were willing to guarantee that either your life or my life will be better.

Check out a few of your product descriptions do they reflect your brand promise? Are they interesting or vanilla? Would you buy this product based on the description?

If you need some inspiration, check out Title Nine, Horny Toad and Moosejaws online stores. Theyve got some good content. Also look at customer reviews from your site and your competitors.

Want to know the conversion impact of improving your product descriptions? Run your new and old descriptions concurrently with an A/B split test.[source:getelastic.com]

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